Revision of Gloria storylines paper

Using this issue to keep track of the revisions for the Gloria event storylines paper, which is a published version of the 1st in-depth demonstrator made as part of A11.

The link to the review, along with working comments can be found here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/141pGBW2spTnn79RLIK0DFGkp_dnz83ttzCFYL6aHjfg/edit?tab=t.0

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